My Destiny

M311.

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I sit,
back pressed
against the old oak.
Legs crossed in meditation.
Mind emptied of contemplation,
waiting instead
for words
sublime.

A gentle voice,
more like a whisper,
speaks directly to my soul.
An angel, perhaps, sings of a place
(to me, yet unfamiliar)
in blessed words (from somewhere else)
of dreams, fond reunions
far from ravages
of time.

A place
where (someday)
I’m meant to be —
a place I’ll find my home,
my destiny.

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23 responses to “My Destiny”

  1. Short and meaningful.
    Two thumbs up!!

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    1. Thanks for your kind words. I enjoyed reading your post “The Swords of Self-Discipline”. It is very good advice. ~ Dennis

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  2. Yes! Thank you for this. Love it.

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    1. Thanks for your kind words. I love your post “Special Needs Swing + a Beautiful Benefactor”. As a child, having suffered from polio, I required special needs playground equipment. My father also found a beautiful benefactor.

      I heartily agree that our time is best spent “focusing on the beautiful people and not the assholes.”

      Cheers,
      Dennis

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      1. Hiya Mr Cradiff,

        I liked your poem so much I was compelled to pick a pen. You sound a lot like me.

        Please forgive me if I’m wrong, but I read this verse as second draft so find my shortened, third draft below:

        MY DESTINY
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        Isit,
        My back
        Against a tree.
        I cross my legs
        And contemplate.
        Wait for Angels
        Of this place
        To whisper truth to me.

        Of dreams, and fond reunions
        Outwith these scary times
        And the place I’m meant to be.
        Where is my home?
        My destiny?

        All the best…

        Spirit Of Enquiry

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      2. I enjoy this version very much. Thanks for giving it so much thought.

        Cheers,
        Dennis

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  3. Wow, you have wonderfully articulated my vision of heaven with just a few words.

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    1. Thank you so much. I have a cabin in the woods that I escape to. Being immersed in nature is what keeps me (relatively) sane.

      Cheers,
      Dennis

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  4. This is a beautiful poem…

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    1. Thanks Aphrodite, I also loved your poem “My Desire”.

      Cheers,
      Dennis

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  5. I hope I’ll ( someday) be there too … the place where I’m meant to be …

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    1. You are on the path now, Nadia. Each choice you make or have made, takes you closer to where you are meant to be. Enjoy the journey. Love yourself.

      Cheers,
      Dennis

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      1. :) … I will! thank you

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  6. I enjoy the whole “A gentle voice, more like a whisper,” line. It brings these images of peace and satisfaction that can only come from loving someone.

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    1. You’re right Jack. Thanks for your comments.

      Cheers,
      Dennis

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  7. Deborah, you’re making me blush. ~ Dennis

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  8. that’s going to quite a happy toast! You’re wonderful Dennis !

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  9. I can relate. Lovely:)

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    1. Thanks! ~ Dennis :)

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  10. I like the connections made here. Joanna

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    1. Hi Joanna, I am very honoured that you liked my poem. ~ Dennis

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  11. Lovely Dennis!

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    1. Thanks Sherry, I’m glad you liked this.

      Cheers,
      Dennis

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