Dennis Cardiff: Poems and Prose

Where You Pass

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by

D Cardiff
in

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trail

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where you pass
your words fall
as gentle flowers
perfect
in imperfection

gathering the blooms
i embrace them
where they sing
directly
to my heart

up ahead
a woodland wren
leads me
to my destination,
to our home

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wren

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16 responses to “Where You Pass”

  1. toad (chris jensen) Avatar
    toad (chris jensen)

    Do you think?

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  2. Elaine Avatar
    Elaine

    Very lovely Dennis!

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    1. dcardiff Avatar
      dcardiff

      Thanks, Elaine for your kind words. ~ Dennis

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  3. thelifeofababybuddha Avatar
    thelifeofababybuddha

    Beautiful words! Great post. Lisa :)

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    1. dcardiff Avatar
      dcardiff

      Hi Lisa, thanks for your kind words. I loved “A Walk on the Wild Side”.

      Namaste,
      Dennis

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      1. thelifeofababybuddha Avatar
        thelifeofababybuddha

        You’re welcome and thanks. Look forward to reading more of your blog. Lisa :)

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  4. FeatherMoon Avatar
    FeatherMoon

    She surrounds you with beauty and delight…

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    1. dcardiff Avatar
      dcardiff

      You read so well between the lines. ~ Dennis

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  5. Tracesofthesoul Avatar
    Tracesofthesoul

    Lovely!

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    1. dcardiff Avatar
      dcardiff

      Thanks, as always, Oliana. ~ Dennis

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  6. Cheryl @ Stop The Stigma Avatar
    Cheryl @ Stop The Stigma

    Very nice!

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      dcardiff

      Thanks, Cheryl. ~ Dennis

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  7. Sue Dreamwalker Avatar
    Sue Dreamwalker

    Dennis, thank you for taking me along your beautiful walk :-) Wonderful words

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    1. dcardiff Avatar
      dcardiff

      Sue, thank you for the gift of your presence as we share a beautiful walk.

      Namaste,
      Dennis

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  8. ghostinthewalls Avatar
    ghostinthewalls

    I really like this. Your poetry/your blog is one of my favorites. ~ Bill

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    1. dcardiff Avatar
      dcardiff

      Hi Bill, I enjoy your blog very much as well. “Neruda Droplets 8” touched a place I’ve been feeling lately. I also like your choice of music. ~ Dennis

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