Woodland Shrine

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shrine

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In a sacred, woodland shrine

I sat with spirits

of another age —

braves, elders and chiefs

at the summer hunting ground.

of the Mississauga tribe

(A nomadic people,

some of them moved south

to join the Cherokee.)

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I asked nothing of them

but, vowed to respect the sanctity of their land

and tribal customs.

Observing my open, lonely heart

they bade me follow them

to a clearing

I’d never before seen.

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Standing there

was a beautiful princess

with eyes of onyx and raven hair.

Long grass swayed

silver in the moonlight

Her fingers brushed the tips of the blades.

We talked —

she bade me follow.

I have followed ever since.

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32 responses to “Woodland Shrine”

  1. sableswan Avatar
    sableswan

    oh, this is beautiful😊

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  2. eyes of onyx…

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  3. It definitely takes you there. Native American culture is so intriguing to me. Great use of imagery.

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  4. Lovely, it paints a clear and wonderful picture.

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  5. Captivating! Absolutely loved the ending.

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    Heartafire

    This is my first visit to this particular blog of yours, normally I stay over at “gotta find a home”…I’m so glad I came here, stunning poetry, wonderful art.

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    1. This refers to a site on Birch Island near where I have a small cabin. I love to meditate there and have seen the spirits of the original inhabitants. It was a very moving experience.

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        Heartafire

        It’s a beautiful and serene place, a lovely place to escape and communicate with souls.

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  7. A.C. Dominguez Avatar
    A.C. Dominguez

    Beautifully written! The last few words echo in my soul! Thank you for the lovely poem!!!

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    1. Thank you, your kind words are much appreciated. ~ Dennis

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  8. Awesome poem Dennis!

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    1. Thank you, Wendel, your kind words are much appreciated.

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  9. You took me there Dennis. I too am following.

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    1. I’m so glad that my words spoke to your heart.

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  10. Well-written and intriguing.

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    1. Thank you so much.

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  11. WOW WOW WOW–I could see the silver grasses and the woman with onyx eyes… And your ending is wonderfully powerful.

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    1. I love your enthusiasm. Thank you.

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      1. I’m kind of known for that, Dennis–hope I don’t overwhelm you! God bless you today.

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  12. W. K. Tucker Avatar
    W. K. Tucker

    Nice…being part Cherokee, it spoke to me on many levels.
    Kathy

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    1. My sons are part Mi’kmaq from New Brunswick, Canada. They are very proud of their heritage.

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        W. K. Tucker

        As am I.

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  13. Very beautifully written Dennis, it takes you there!

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    1. Thanks, Mark. Your words are much appreciated.

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  14. This is a great poem. I wanted to share on twitter and facebook but I couldn’t connect from your site.

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    1. Hi Meredith, thanks for your kind words. I’ll have to check my settings to find the problem with Twitter and FB.

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  15. Choctaw on my maternal grandmother’s side, I am especially intrigued by this elegant poem. Great work, Dennis!

    ron

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    1. My sons are part Mi’kmaq from New Brunswick, Canada. They are very proud of their heritage.

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  16. Very ensnaring!

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    1. I’m glad that you enjoyed the read.

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    1. Thank you, Fern.

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