Figment

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i am
a figment
a dream

an image
unseen

words
unread

a figment
a dream

Without a Dreamer
i am
nothing

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13 responses to “Figment”

  1. LadyBlueRose's Thoughts Into Words Avatar
    LadyBlueRose’s Thoughts Into Words

    made me think of the song The Impossible of Dream….
    within… without….though-out
    dream away doubt
    sing out loud
    take to the mountain and shout
    the impossible is possible to be
    it all starts within a dream…

    Dreams are what we are to be….to see…
    wonderful poem as always Dennis…
    Take Care…You Matter…
    )0(
    ladyblue

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    1. I agree, maryrose, “Dreams are what we are to be…to see…” I’m glad that you liked it.

      Take Care…You Matter…
      )0(
      Dennis

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  2. melanietoulouse Avatar
    melanietoulouse

    Dennis… you’re a dreamer and a wonderul poet, your words come from your heart, which is an amazing keyboard… :-) My very best and tons of inspiration!

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    1. I am, indeed, a dreamer. That gets me into lots of trouble. I can always use more inspiration. I’m glad you liked my poem.

      Cheers,
      Dennis

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  3. Excellent cohesion !

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    1. Thanks, Deborah, for your kind words. ~ Dennis

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  4. So true, we are nothing without the figment of our imagination and Dreams..

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    1. Thanks Sue, I couldn’t survive in a world with out dreams and imagination.

      Cheers,
      Dennis

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  5. Thanks Tanumoy, your comments mean a lot to me. ~ Dennis

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    1. Pleasure’s mine sir. Keep writing and sharing your thoughts. And do visit my backyard sometimes, experimented a bit with few things. Hope you’ll like it. :)

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  6. Great wordplay! Profound thoughts! :)

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  7. I like the play on words and the rhythm. But I most like the idea that something is not something without its host (ie. a dream without a dreamer, a book without a reader, etc.)

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    1. Thanks Jack, that’s exactly what I was thinking.

      Cheers,
      Dennis

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