Desperation Drive

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Just kicking stones, down a long dirt road — nothing much to do.
Got my Stetson and my ridin’ boots — soles are worn clear through.
Leaving heartache, going nowhere fast, more dead than alive.
At daybreak, feet are pointing to, Desperation Drive.

When you’re down and out, in a hard luck place, no stars shine at night;
I’ve been looking down, such a long, long time, just can’t see the light.
Haven’t got a cent, haven’t got a friend, no will to survive;
That’s the reason why, I’m heading for, Desperation Drive.

Venezuela vowed she loved me true, caught the midnight train;
She took my money, left my broken heart, lying in the rain.
Got to leave this place, got to hitch a ride, out on highway five;
If they ask me where, I’m going, I’ll say,  “Desperation Drive.”

I miss that woman, she’s on my mind, the breeze still sighs her name;
She’s mean and evil, but my lonely heart, loves her just the same.
On the waterfront I’ll check the bars and every lowdown dive;
If she’s not there, I’ll rent a place on, Desperation Drive.

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18 responses to “Desperation Drive”

  1. midnightwriterporvida Avatar
    midnightwriterporvida

    Amazing!!!

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  2. Achingly beautiful, Dennis.

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    1. Lost love is one of the most painful experiences.

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  3. At first I thought it was a poem and was thinking to myself, my, this could be a song. Then I was it’s in the category of “song lyrics” – it would be a great country song!

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    1. I have sung this while playing my guitar. My singing and guitar playing aren’t that good, but they give me pleasure.

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  4. Wonderful! The emotion can be felt through the words.

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  5. Excellent Dennis :-)

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  6. I really like this one — perfectly fits the photo, too!

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  7. veronicahaunanifitzhugh Avatar
    veronicahaunanifitzhugh

    reads like a country song. :)

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    1. The music I had going through my head when I wrote this was Bob Dylan’s Desperation Row. It was a tune I couldn’t get out of my head, so I put my own words to it.

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  8. You must have experienced that in real life to have written such powerful feelings!

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    1. I’ve experienced similar things. The names and descriptions have been changed to protect the guilty. I have issues with trust that sometimes take me to the dark side.

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  9. Dermott Hayes Avatar
    Dermott Hayes

    Shades of Desolation Row?

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    1. Dermott Hayes Avatar
      Dermott Hayes

      Same neighbourhood, eh?

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    2. Very much. I’m a Bob Dylan fan from way back. In his book, Chronicles: Volume One, he describes how he would deconstruct other writer’s songs, add his own content and make them his own.

      “When the Ship Comes In” is a folk music song by Bob Dylan, released on his third … Another inspiration was the Bertolt Brecht/Kurt Weill song, “Pirate Jenny”. (Wikipedia)

      Bob Dylan uses a lot of neighborhoods like this, my personal favorite is Subterranean Homesick Blues. I heard that back in 1965 when it first came out. It knocked my socks off.

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