whisper

.

duskc

.

our paddles  dip

silently into the black.

evening mist hovers

over the lake

as we glide near the shore.

otters playfully cruise nearby,

raccoons timidly drink,

deer watch

.

later

a camp fire

to ward off the chill

of the northern breeze.

time to cuddle close,

whisper secrets

even though

we’re alone

 .


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6 responses to “whisper”

  1. Oops, the paddle’s dip into the water…. Delicious.

    Coming up from within.

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  2. I love the way you described the paddle

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  3. I love this poem, love how the simplicity of the imagery evokes the complexity of emotion. I love the ending and the sense of the dichotomy..you are alone but still choose to whisper. This is such a beautiful piece.

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  4. Spring and summer at the lake. I remember it well. #ThrowbackThursday Backatcha:

    http://randomstoryteller.com/2014/06/27/summer-trout/

    A short homage to summer trout . . .

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  5. Fond memories of my well-spent youth!

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