Tennessee Honey

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Thoughts drift south,
Jack Daniel’s country
where the weather
suits my mood.

On a barstool
I park my bones
Inhale the Jack, magnolia —
sweet, sweet surrender.

A woman alone
at a corner table —
darkest eyes,
brightest smile,
auburn hair
to her shoulders.

I think, Why not?
Our eyes meet,
I saunter towards her
and know, from the look she gives,
she’s heard it all before.

“Ma’am, It would give me
the greatest pleasure
to buy you a drink
and share your table for a while.
If I can’t keep you smilin’
I promise,
I’ll take my conversation elsewhere.”

She said with the utmost
southern grace, charm
and hospitality,
“You’ve got ten minutes.
I don’t like to be disappointed.”

I fell into her raven pools,
somewhere, I got lost there.
I don’t know my way too well
around these parts
but, I’d swear she lured me
with some kind of mojo.

My eyes refused to look away
from ruby lips (so sensual)
as they spoke words of love
in a voice
of the sweetest, southern honey,
words…dripping…
tantalizing.

The evening passed,
holding hands across the table.
I was enthralled and enchanted.
Where it went from there
I refuse to say
(gentleman’s code of honor).

Such beauty
I have never known.
It keeps coming back
to haunt me.

My thoughts
were only passing through
but, in my dreams I see
the darkest eyes,
brightest smile,
hear her voice —
Tennessee honey.

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17 responses to “Tennessee Honey”

  1. This sounds like a special night with a lifetime of sweet memories like honey. As long as there were no regrets in making this last but one night, you have no reason to be sad.

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  2. Susan Langer Avatar
    Susan Langer

    I liked your poem. I felt I was eavesdropping on the even. My favorite lines were:
    “Where it went from there
    I refuse to say
    (gentleman’s code of honor).”

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      Susan Langer

      Meant evening…:)

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  3. Wow.. This is so lovely..

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  4. jasmine Avatar
    jasmine

    You’ve been writing a lot more poetry again recently. Makes me smile.

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  5. I read this loudly for my wife ……. she said, I’ll buy you a bottle, honey !

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    1. I won’t ask you how the rest of your day went, but it sounds like it got off to a good start.

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  6. I was whisked away with your words!

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    1. Thank you so much.

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  7. Nicely done. My good friend would say “Tennessee Honey, is smoother than a prom queen’s thigh.” My wife has never liked this phrase.

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    1. That’s a beautiful thought. My wife probably wouldn’t like it either. Women — go figure.

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      1. He usually used it to describe a nice golf swing he made. Though, he was silent on the ones that sent the golf balls into the woods. For my wife, I have to say “smoother than a baby’s behind” as a safer substitute.

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    photojedi22

    Like how you flowed this piece… Would also like a shot of JD to cap the day off

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    1. Thanks for your kind words. Yes, a shot of JD is the perfect ending to a day. I love your photographs. I was bird watching on the weekend, but they wouldn’t stay still long enough to get a good look at them.

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  9. Neat. Incredibly smooth. Magnifique.

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    1. That’s just the way I like my whiskey.

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